I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
WOW! I like your poem I like how you described how your summer was. But maybe next time you can add more adjectives. When I was writing this story it was a struggle I wonder if it was a struggle for you too. If you want to see my That was Summer poem click on this link: http://shsevanj.blogspot.co.nz/2017/04/that-was-summer.html
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ReplyDeleteWOW! I like your poem I like how you described how your summer was. But maybe next time you can add more adjectives. When I was writing this story it was a struggle I wonder if it was a struggle for you too. If you want to see my That was Summer poem click on this link: http://shsevanj.blogspot.co.nz/2017/04/that-was-summer.html
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